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HikaruXKaoru fanfic: 

Pretty short cus it's my first:
LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEEEEMMMOOOONNNN!!!!!!! Well...half lemon...BUT WHO CARES!!!! X3

Kaoru lay uncomfortably in their bed next to his brother. Hikaru rolled around moaning. He was having a wet dream. Kaoru had woken up a few mintues before and just couldn't get back to sleep. The worst part of it was the fact that the whole time, Hikaru had been calling out HIS name! 
"Uuunn....Kaoru..." Hikaru moaned as he rolled about some more. 
Kaoru couldn't hold it in much longer. Just listening to his brother made him arroused. 
"Ah!" Hikaru moaned. 
"That's it!" Kaoru said not too loudly. He sat up, leaned over and kissed his brother. He didn't know why, but he suddenely had the urge to. Hikaru's moans were muffled by his brother's hot lips. Kaoru forced open Hikaru's mouth and stuck his tongue inside, exploring the hot cavern.

Hikaru's eyes started to flicker open. At first he didn't know what was going on but soon did and quickly pushed his brother off of him. 
"K-Kaoru!" He harshly whispered. "What are you doing?!" 
"It's okay right?" Kaoru said in a lustfull voice. "You were having naughty dreams about me weren't you Hikaru?" 

Hikaru quickly looked down to see his hardened member. He blushed furiously and looked back up at Kaoru.
"U-Ummmm..." He said not looking him in the eye. Without warning Kaoru started kissing his neck. Then he started going down his chest. 
"Kaoru? Wh-What are..." Hikaru asked moaning slightly.  
"It's okay." Kaoru said leaning down further. "I'll fix it. It's my fault after all." 
"Ka-Kaoru!" Hikaru said as he started pulling his pants down. "What are yo-"
"Ssshhh." Said Kaoru. "Don't worry. You don't have to look. But I would really love to see your cute blushing face." 
"Kaoru- Ah!" Hikaru moaned as Kaoru strocked the tip of his member. (AAAAAHHHH!!!! This is really hard to write....but for some reason its fun! I love it when Kaoru's the seme! X3)

Hikaru moaned more as Kaoru's hand pumped up and down slowly at first, but then getting faster. 
"Ka...Kaoru!" Hikaru said blushing lustfully. 
"Hikaru." Kaoru said looking up. "You are so cute this way." He leaned down more. 
"Don't- AH!" Hikaru moaned as Kaoru inserted his member (sorry but im not saying anything BUT member) into his mouth and started to suck. 
"No...Kaoru.." Hikaru said bettween moans. "Y-You can't..." 

Kaoru started going faster and sucking harder. Hikaru was nearly at his limit. 
"Ka...I'm...I'm gonna..." Hikaru "warned" him. Suddenly, Hikaru screamed loudly. Kaoru drew back. Then there was a swallowing noise. 
There was a silence while the twins brearhed heavily. 

"You....You s-swallowed it...?" Hikaru questioned. 
"Y....Yeah..." Kaoru answered flustered. 
"Why?" 
"I....don't know..."

There was another silence. Suddenly, (everything is so sudden!) both twins leaned forward and crushed eachother's lips together. They shared a passionate kiss together and both lay back down. 

"Ne....Kaoru?" Hikaru said looking up at the ceiling. 
"Hhmm?"
"I...I love you! Like...more than I should..."
"....m...me too Hikaru." Kaoru pecked Hikaru on the nose and held his hand.  

Just as they were about to fall asleep Kaoru spoke,
"Hey Hikaru?" 
"mmm..." He replied practiacally asleep. 
"You know...You're so cute...when you blush. I just wanna eat you up." 

The END!!!! MAH FIRST LEMONY-ISH FANFIC EVER!!!! 

(BTW the maids of the household had woken up and were fangirl screaming from being able to here them from the other end of the hallway....just sayin....)
Yes....my first....Please dont hurt me.
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XLxLightxMisaX321 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
XD That last part with the maids was lol. 

But that was very sweet. Good job. ^^
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Vocaloid890 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
this hurts my throat... but it's nice for a first lemon story
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Piggehluver Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
MORE! I DEMAND MASS PROUDUCTION OF LEMON! NOW! *flips tables*
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Vocaloid890 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
calm down
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:iconpiggehluver:
Piggehluver Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
I'm sorry bro. I lose it sometimes
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tammysql Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  New member
i agree with u. WE NEED MORE
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Rosita101 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This needs mature tag.
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:iconlexy5968:
Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
i don't know why it doesn't already...
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:iconrosita101:
Rosita101 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Doesn't what? Have a mature tag or need a mature tag? :/
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:iconlexy5968:
Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
have a mature tag
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Iluvsebasmichaelis Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Writer
damn *nosebleed*
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:iconaquaman324:
Aquaman324 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
I need another now!!!!!!!!!
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llama-and-lion Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
Nosr bleed!! :D :) <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3z
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xIggyKirklandx Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*dies of awesomness*
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AliTFP Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*dies from massive nosebleed* MAKE ANOTHER ONE PLEASE~!!!!! :squee: :heart: :heart: :squee:
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rosarioandvampire214 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
super nosebleed
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KayAteTheCookies Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
haha your comments were so funny, they made me laugh :DDDD
"everything is so sudden" :DDDDD and the maids, haha :DDDDDD
but awesome lemon, and I can imagine you need balls to write this stuff. member and such.
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aloistrancy101 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh my god!! cool bro :iconsupernosebleedplz:
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Cutey36365 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Awesome Kaoru as the seme is cool
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KokoroHeartxX Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Good job for your first -Lies on ground from fangirl waaay too much today- (I have that same obsession of making a uke a seme and a seme a uke XD)
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:iconlexy5968:
Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
well truthfully i've always thought of Kaoru as more of a seme! especially in the manga!
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LonleyForgotten Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awsome *Q*
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Creinie Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
hcjbcdugsvbjdhf this was awesome eue
I like it when Kaoru's seme xD
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Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
thank you!~ I just have an obsession with making ukes semes and semes ukes....:3
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jubgougwr Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
Is it bad that while I was reading this I was like 'NO KAORU IS MEANT UKE. D:'?
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punqq Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
SAME OMG
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:iconlexy5968:
Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
of course not! whenever i think about it i always go "Why the hell did I make Kaoru seme....?"
but then I realize it is just my perverted obsession making ukes into semes and semes into ukes!~ <3
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D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG MORE i just kept fangirling over this Xxxx
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IzzyMTweekxferblover Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
YESH!!!!! MOAR!!!!!!!!!! I fangirled too <3
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D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
YAY hehe <3 Xxx
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IzzyMTweekxferblover Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
xxx <3
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:icond-girllegend:
D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^w^ Xxxx
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IzzyMTweekxferblover Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
looooool omg japan dissed america xxxx
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D-GirlLegend Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:O oh no lol oh no he didn't lol Xxxx
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IzzyMTweekxferblover Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yh he was like

"I eat rike a human being instead of using food to cover my emotions"
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kisshu-nya Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
OH MY GOD I LOVE LOVE !!!!!!!! can you also make one with hikaru and haruhi?
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TimeLady427 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
>/////////< OMG OMG OMG Awesome!!!! *Has yaoi fangirl attack*
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shaggythehedgehog Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I thinks u did epik!!
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Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
hehe thanx!
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shaggythehedgehog Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I was melting all ovr the chair! Lol
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Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
good to know! XD
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lunarosehitachiin Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :squee: I'm not used to seeing Kaoru as the dominant one but it was still hot. Great job!!! ^_^
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Lexy5968 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
thanx soooo much! (its cus i love kaoru and love switching roles!~)
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lunarosehitachiin Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. I'm really tempted to write a lemon with them but I suck royally at it...best I got is in my journal entry ^^;
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SasuNaru500 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
are you sure that was your first fanfic it was AMAZING ! :)
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:iconlexy5968:
Lexy5968 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
well that is not the lemon version though, i did make one!~ teehee
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:iconlexy5968:
Lexy5968 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
not my first actually, but my first yaoi and lemon fanfiction. and thanx!~ <3
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MenekyNeko22 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
...it was...ok...for a first....
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Lexy5968 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
Thanx~
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MenekyNeko22 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
^.^
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